I have put some considerable thought
in what I should discuss and write about for my research essay. After changing
my original topic, I have decided to write about the issue of hydraulic fracturing
(commonly referred to as fracking). The “puzzle to be solved” is whether the
benefits of hydraulic fracturing outweigh the negative potential consequences
to the environment. With President Obama’s
recent regulations on fracking on federal lands, there is a lot of exigency with
this issue. In order to limit the exigency and make this issue more manageable,
I will just be focusing on whether the benefits outweigh the environmental
dangers and not on President Obama’s recent legislation. In the “Rhetorical
Situation” by Lloyd Bitzer, the exigence is defined as “an imperfection marked
by urgency; it is a defect, an obstacle, something waiting to be done, a thing which
is other than it should be”. The issue of fracking is huge right now, and you
could go as so far as to say that it is more important or debated than it ever
was before. This is mainly due to the fact that fracking wells are being built
everyday and this could potentially help or harm our country (“something waiting
to be done”). In Susan L. Brantley ‘s article in The New York Times, she explains hydraulic fracking and many facts
such as pros and cons about fracking. She also states “approximately one
million American wells have been fracked since the 1940s” (Brantley). This
important statistic explains the exigency and circumstances for this rhetorical
discourse.
Fracking will have an effect on
many different audiences on different levels. Such audiences that have a stake
in this issue are all types of corporations in the energy industry such as exploration
and production, energy services, and midstream companies. Other audiences that
have a stake in this issue besides energy companies are US citizens who live near
and around these fracking sites, consumers who use energy products, and mainly
the government officials who deal with the energy industry. According to a Forbes article, “at least 15.3 million
Americans lived within a mile of a well that has been drilled since 2000” (Gold).
The issue of fracking affects a diverse audience from large corporations to
small communities around frac sites. I currently am tossed between the two
sides of fracking. I have researched numerous amounts of benefits (energy independence,
job creation, cheaper energy) and negative consequences (mini earthquakes,
global warming, polluted water) and I am still on the fence whether or not the
fracking benefits outweigh the negative consequences. In order to make this
issue manageable, the target audience I will be writing to will be the people
who are undecided about the overall pros and cons about fracking. I am deciding
to mainly consider these people because as Bitzer put “rhetorical audience
consists only of those persons who are capable of being influenced by discourse
and of being mediators of change”. In order to fully inform the audience, I need
to further research the legitimacy of the consequences of fracking and whether
they are positive or negative.

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This is an interesting piece Mr. Hebert. You have managed to remain unbiased regarding the fracking issue thus far, and have related your indecisiveness to your target audience. I admire the authenticity of your essay, as you will truly convince yourself of a stance in attempting to convince your audience. This will provide an excellent balance between the various sides of the issue and address the concerns of both pro and anti fracking parties. You mentioned politics briefly in this blog post. As a highly controversial political topic, fracking provides tons of political context for your essay. Cheap natural gas is especially good for energy-intensive industries, like chemicals and fertilizer. As the domestic gas supply has shot up and prices have plummeted, chemical stocks have risen. There are many economic and political benefits to be argued here. You have done a good job providing a taste of these topics inn your blog alongside the deeper exigence you hope to address. I look forward to reading your essay.
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